An unstable job applicant destroys an ambitious yet indecisive recruiter’s career and then attacks his loved ones after she's ghosted following an interview.
Story behind the screenplay
During his 20+ years in recruitment, Lance Gilbert has seen it all. Thousands of interviews with innumerable bizarre and often downright freaky encounters were the seeds of No Hire. Whether or not this exact scenario played out during his career is something that cannot be confirmed or denied.
Producer feedback:
Hi Lance,
I just finished reading the script, and it was such a fun and thrilling experience. Normally, I don't give out notes like I’m about to below, but I really enjoy your writing and your approach to niche and innovative storytelling. Please let me know what you think, and let's definitely keep the dialogue open.
Strengths:
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Compelling Protagonist: Lena is a strong, complex character with a deep backstory. Her transformation from frustrated applicant to vengeful antagonist is well-developed, with her dark history and simmering rage making her both relatable and terrifying.
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Social Commentary: The script deftly critiques the recruitment industry and the ethical gray areas recruiters operate within. The tension between quick placements and genuine candidate care feels timely and relevant.
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Strong Visual and Tone: The script creates a dark, gritty atmosphere in Boston’s urban landscape. The detailed action scenes, especially involving Lena's violent tendencies, are visceral and cinematic.